Script Doctor

Introduction

Diagnose a written script, find the root cause and fix it with the smallest change

A deep diagnosis of a script or outline that already exists, followed by surgical revisions. It looks for the root cause rather than the symptoms, picks the lens that fits the problem (Aristotle, Field, McKee, Save the Cat, the Hero's Journey, Truby, Mamet), pinpoints the scene and the line, and proposes the smallest fix that keeps the author's intent. Changes are made only after you agree, then checked again; it works for short dramas, series and features.